You read
the following advertisement in a newspaper and decide to organize a visit to
the factory. As secretary of Young Entrepreneurs’ Club, write a letter the
factory manager requesting for a visit.
You must
include the following information in your letter:
- day, date
and time of visit
- name of
school and contact number
- number of
students going and teachers accompanying
- mode of
transport
- your
choice of activity during the visit
Model
Answer
The
Secretary,
Sekolah
Menengah Jitra,
Jitra,
Kedah
General
Manager,
Love Candy
Chocolate Factory,
Lot 41-A,
Jalan Budi,
Jitra, 25
September 2015
Dear Sir/
Madam,
Permission
To Visit Love Candy Chocolate Factory
On behalf
of the Young Entrepreneurs’ Club, I would like to request for our club members
to visit your factory.
2. We plan on visiting the factory on
Monday, 5th of October 2015 at 11.00 a.m. We will be a group consisting
of 20 students and two teachers and will be arriving in our school bus.
Therefore, we would like to request for a parking space for the bus as well.
3. The purpose of our visit is to learn
more about how candy and chocolate are made. This will broaden our knowledge
and help us to understand better on the subject. I would also like to request
for the guided tour, video presentation and lectures to
help us understand more. From this visit, we were also hoping to learn more
about business and inspire our members if they were to have a dream to venture
in candy or chocolate business in the future.
4. We
were to understand that we could sample some of your products and buy them at
discount prices. This is an opportunity for our club to purchase them and sell
them for profits during one of our club activity. We would also to know whether
we can still purchase them at discount price even after the visitation month is
over. If you could provide us with a list of prices and whether we could buy
the products in batch after this, we would be really grateful.
5. If
you need to ask anything regarding this, you may contact us at 047855611 (Sekolah Menengah Jitra) or directly contact our club advisor, Mr Nazmi Mustafa at 0195874561.
We are looking forward for your early reply so we can plan our trip properly to
your factory.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Adreena Mira Amin
…………………………………………
(ADREENA MIRA AMIN)
(SECRETARY)