SPM : Narrative Writing 1

Spm essay 

 Narrative Writing 

 Write a story in not less than 350 words with the following ending. 
 “...he closed the door quietly behind him and left.” 

 Model answer 

 James was always busy. In fact, he couldn’t remember that last time he could take it easy and slow down. Everything in his life moved at fast pace. If it wasn’t fast enough, James made sure it would be. The reason why he was like that was because he needed to support his family of five – a wife and four children.

From dawn ‘till dusk, James was as busy as a bee. He needed to make sure his company up and running smoothly. He was so busy that he spent most time at work and sleeping at the office. In fact, he missed most of his children’s important days such as birthdays, recitals and ceremonies as he didn’t have time to attend them.

His misses were frown upon by his children. They couldn’t understand why he never made time for them. After James missed the latest birthday, the children couldn’t take it anymore. The eldest asked their mother of the reason why their dad was hardly home.

“Your father works really hard to support us. He didn’t want us to grow up like him. Your grandparents were poor so your father suffered a lot. That’s why he works like there’s no tomorrow to ensure a better life for all of us,” explained his wife calmly.

The children now understood why their father was often busy, decided to do something if they want their father to spend more time with them. They tried to raise money with doing odd jobs, selling lemonade and saving. In a few weeks, they managed to raise a thousand dollars. They decided to hand over the money to their father. They wrote a letter and asked their mother to send it to their father’s workplace.

The next morning, James who arrived at work, noticed a small package on the briefcase. There’s a letter attached to it. He slowly opened it and read the letter.

“Dear dad, this money maybe not much but we hope it can pay for the time you need to leave work and come to Aaron’s birthday party tomorrow. We really hope you can come. We miss you.”

James read the letter over and over again. He never thought his children would miss him so much they would think to give him money to pay for his time needed to spend with them. He realized that he was always busy and neglected them. James decided that he need to speak to them and ensure them he really love them. James decided that he should take a break today to return to his love ones. He grabbed his suitcase. He closed the door behind him quietly and left.

Narrative Writing 3

Write a story in not less than 120 words with the following opening sentences.

“It was late at night and I was still awake…”

Model answer

It was late at night and I was still awake as I was studying for exam next week. All of a sudden, I saw a shadow from the Uncle Muthu’s roof. The shadow looked like a man tried to break in into Uncle Muthu’s house through the roof.

Quickly, I went to my parents’ room and woke them up. My father called the police and the Uncle Muthu to notify them. Not long after that, the police showed up and the robber was apprehended.

It turned out the robber was a man from the next village. He was caught before for the same crime and was seen around our neighbourhood yesterday.

The police thanked me for my fast action and so did Uncle Muthu’s family. I was delighted that I was able to help my neighbour when they needed them. 

Narrative Writing 2

Write a story in not less than 120 words with the following ending.

“...I realized I should have studied better.”

Model answer

Mathematics test will be held in another two weeks. I was busy with Drama Club that I didn’t have time to study properly. I was chosen to represent our school as one of the cast members at Inter-school Drama Competition. Mrs. Lee, my Mathematics’ teacher told us that any students who failed the test may have to take a repetitive test before school holiday and we would be banned from any club activities.

I was too assured that I would not fail the test. After all, I never did. My Mathematics’ score before showed an average of 50%. So, I did only a little revision before the test.

When the result came out, I only received 39% which was a fail grade. As a result, I was one of the students who failed the test.

I was dropped from the cast as the competition was held before the school holiday. If I passed the test, I would have joined them. I realized I should have studied better.

Narrative Writing 1

Write a story in not less than 120 words with the following opening sentences.

“I was walking back from school when I suddenly heard someone calling for help…”

Model answer

I was walking back from school when I suddenly heard someone calling for help. I turned to find the voice to investigate. Near the sidewalk, I found an old lady crouching. Quickly, I went to help her. She told me that she fell down when her bag was grabbed by a snatch thief. 

“It’s okay, please wait while I go and get help!” I told her.

I ran towards the school and notified the guards on duty. They asked for a teacher’s help to send the old lady to the hospital with the teacher’s car. The old lady thanked me for helping her.

The next day, the principal held a special assembly to congratulate me for helping the old lady. He said we should help others in need and encourage other students to do as I did. I was very happy.

Formal Letter Format

Asking For Advice

MODEL QUESTION

Write a letter to your elder sister asking advice on a situation that you are facing. Your letter should not be less than 120 words.

MODEL ANSWER

4402 Blok 2,

Apartment Suria,

47200 Subang,
Selangor.

2^nd of September 2013

Dear Melissa,

                How are you at the university? I hope everything is well on your side. It’s been a while since we talk to each other. I need to ask you for some advice regarding this problem that I am facing.

                I have been a member at Photography Club for a year now. Through the club, I gained lots of experience and new friends. I am happy there.

                However, our parents opposed of my participation with the club. They told me to quit and focus on my study. I couldn’t see why I should quit. But they threaten to cut my allowance if I kept being obstinate.

                I didn’t want to quit the club but I didn’t like to oppose our parents either. I didn’t know what I should do. Please advise me on what to do. If it’s possible, I want to stay the course. I’ll be looking forward to hear from you soon!

               

                Your sincerely,

Maria

MODEL QUESTION 

During last school holiday, you attended a motivational camp organized by your school. Write a letter to your friend telling him about your experience at the camp. Your letter should not be less than 120 words.

MODEL ANSWER 

Lot 20, Kampung Pandan, 

59100 Kuala Lumpur. 

31st of August 2013 

Dear Adam,

        How are you and your family? I hope you and your family are in the pink of health. I’m sorry for being late in replying your letter. I was busy last week as I attended a motivational camp organized by my school.

        Only 100 students were chosen to participate at the camp and I was lucky to be one of them. It was held at a campsite near our school. The place was beautiful and a man-made lake was built in the centre of the area. The area was scenic and serene.

        One of the most interesting activities was the Owl Night on the second night. We were separated and placed at different locations in the campsite. The purpose of the activity was to encourage us to be brave.

       I also tried canoeing and flying fox for the first time. I was afraid of height but I wanted to try those activities to conquer my fear. I was glad that I tried them.

       Through this camp, I made lots of new friends. We were sad when we had to leave but there’s always a way for us to keep in touch. Well, that’s all from me. I hope to hear from you soon!

Your friend, 

Hakim